Here we have a page that had an implied march of Septimus and his soldiers. They are hinted at, and then appear en masse a few pages later. They needed to be shown as a group before their grande gathering, so I added a new panel. Also, Septimus doesn't walk with his men, but rather rides a chariot contraption. The new establishing shot now better shows this luxury, whereas before it was mostly cropped out.
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